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Pasqual Allen's avatar

You got a like cause I like you.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

That ending! Gorgeous! Such a beautiful poem

voidlight alchemy (em)'s avatar

🥹🫶🖤 thank you

Vivien Beere's avatar

Lovely wistful piece, that couple.. no they don’t know what’s in store either… neither does the writer either. Your poem is unexpectedly complex in that way. 😊

voidlight alchemy (em)'s avatar

Thank you so much 🖤🖤🖤

Mark ✌️💙🫂's avatar

What a breathtaking piece of poetry.

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

That couple on the beach says very little, yet somehow tells the whole story.

Keiichiro Iwamoto's avatar

Good evening, Em. Although it seems to be writing about lost love, perhaps it is actually teaching us the preciousness of the time we have here and now? 😇

voidlight alchemy (em)'s avatar

Thank you so much. Definitely about both 🥲 thanks for reading and feeling it.

James (HVR)'s avatar

I envy them as well.

voidlight alchemy (em)'s avatar

Hard not to. Good for Jackie, though! 😭

Thanks for reading 🫶

RC Irving's avatar

This is so beautiful! Such a strong sense of place and so much heart

voidlight alchemy (em)'s avatar

Thank you so much 😊🫶

Leonorra Dainler's avatar

So beautiful

Aster solenne's avatar

GRLL!! YUU DID IT AGAIN 😭💖 LOVE IT!💖

voidlight alchemy (em)'s avatar

Ahhhh thank you so much 🥹🖤

Aster solenne's avatar

Ofcourse lovee! 😉💖

Honey 🍯 & Shadows 🌑's avatar

This piece is beautiful. I felt so much love and warmth but also a sense of grief. Always cherish your time with those you love 💗 so you’ll never have to wish that you said or did something. Or regret not saying enough or being present in the moment. Beautiful poetry!