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Cierra Angeline's avatar

What a thoughtful reflection of culture and family history - the tangible pieces that are lost and the ideology and practices that unsettle themselves over time.

Culture in America is such a curious thing. I don't think there's any bits of my family's culture that have even been passed down. Just americanism.

One thing that does come to mind is in my patriarchal history, there's been loads of truck drivers. And my immediate family all love and prefer to drive and listen to loud music in the car. I'm not sure how cultural that is... But your piece has me thinking about what is passed down and what we carry with us that our ancestors carried with them, too.

Beautifully written and expressed. Thank you for sharing 🙏🏼

voidlight alchemy (em)'s avatar

Thank you so much 🩷🩷🩷🥹 & I love your reflection, that’s an interesting correlation!!

Pasqual Allen's avatar

Thank you for this wonderful piece beautiful.

voidlight alchemy (em)'s avatar

thank you so much 🙏

Pasqual Allen's avatar

You’re welcome.

Gary L Taylor's avatar

I really liked that. From looking at the outdoor murals and learning about the work it takes to maintain them and then transferring thoughts on that, reflectively to your own memories, and thoughts of family, loss and then, having started out looking at something from the past, considering the future.

Beautiful work.

voidlight alchemy (em)'s avatar

Thank you so much, Gary!!! ☺️✨

What is it?'s avatar

So good, Em! I was happy to see this in Coolest Poems ✨💕

voidlight alchemy (em)'s avatar

Thank you so much! ☺️🫶

Dua's avatar

This piece made me think of my ancestors that must be scattered around the globe! So many memories I could think of! What a fascinating read! Thanks for this beautiful poem. <3 :)

voidlight alchemy (em)'s avatar

Thank you so much for sharing the thoughts it brought you 🫶☺️ It means a lot!

Dua's avatar

You're welcome dear :)🌸

Keiichiro Iwamoto's avatar

Thank you for another beautiful poem. After reading it, I naturally found myself thinking about my old memories and the people who were important to me. 😇

voidlight alchemy (em)'s avatar

Thank you so much 🫶 I’m glad you felt it!!!

Jacqueline's avatar

So beautiful and real, Em. 'Tomato sauce scented nostalgia...' And such a special experience to hear you read it, too.

voidlight alchemy (em)'s avatar

Thank you so much 💗🥹 it was a very personal piece, it means a lot that you enjoyed it.